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Maxine ([personal profile] maxine_chan) wrote2007-01-04 05:25 pm
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FIC: Rikkai drabbles

Wheee, hello everyone! Happy New Year and stuff. :D Here, have some ficlet-ish things. Drabbles. Rikkaidai, whom I have no confidence in writing. ^^;; Specifically for [profile] chriek and [personal profile] bouncy. <33333




~~Rikkai. Prompt: ice skating~~


“Out of the way, senpai, you’re blocking my path!”

Kirihara! Slow down, you’re going to hit someone--”

“Beat it, Jackal, I’m trying to win a race here!”

Jackal sighed, slowing to a stop as he came around to where Sanada was standing perfectly still, his hands gripping the ledge.

“Whose idea was it to go ice skating, anyway?” Sanada grumbled, pulling his hat lower over his eyes and trying to pretend like he had no idea who the two boys zipping around the rink were.

“I have no idea, but if Kirihara knocks down one more person, I’m leaving before anyone gets a chance to kick us out,” Jackal said. He watched as Marui pulled ahead briefly, but Kirihara sped up as they rounded the curve, blowing past three people and knocking one of them onto their ass.

Sanada looked at him expectantly.

“That guy doesn’t count,” Jackal said. “I’ve seen him fall about a billion times without Kirihara’s help.”

“Sanada,” Yukimura called as he came up next to them, skidding neatly to a stop. “You haven’t moved from that spot in the last half-hour.” Yanagi pulled up after him.

“I’m making sure Kirihara doesn’t cause any trouble.”

“And you’re doing a good job of it,” Yanagi said, arching his eyebrows as yet another random person became good friends with the ice.

Jackal winced. “I’m gonna go…get hot chocolate or something,” he said, and beat a hasty exit out of the rink.

“Akaya’s just having fun,” Yukimura said lightly, leaning against the wall next to Sanada. He rubbed his gloved hands together, glancing at the other boy. “You’ll get cold if you don’t start moving.”

“I won’t get cold,” Sanada said, shivering. Yukimura shared a look with Yanagi.

“Are you stuck?” Yanagi asked.

Sanada narrowed his eyes. “Of course not.”

Yukimura chuckled. “It’s okay if you don’t know how to skate.”

“I know how to skate. I can skate just fine. I just…find it boring.”

“Genichirou, your knees are shaking,” Yanagi said.

“Maybe I’m just cold!” Sanada snapped, his cheeks going pink.

“You said you weren’t.” Yukimura arched his eyebrows.

“…” said Sanada.

“What’s wrong, Sanada?” Niou called as he twirled lazily past, hand-in-hand with Yagyuu. He grinned over his shoulder at him. “Don’t tell me you’re scared!

Sanada gritted his teeth. “Thirty laps, Niou!”

Niou stuck out his tongue, spinning Yagyuu out and away from him and then pulling him back again. Yagyuu turned and starting skating backwards effortlessly, reaching up to adjust his glasses. “You can get those finished here rather quickly.”

“Hey, good plan!” Niou said. He jumped and did a quick 360 in the air, landing smoothly. Then he gave Yagyuu a solute and took off across the ice.

“I hate them,” Sanada muttered.

Yanagi snorted. “No you don’t.”

“Buchou, watch!” Kirihara suddenly yelled, nothing but a blur as he flew past them. “Watch this! Watch me! Are you watching?”

“I’m watching, Akaya!” Yukimura called back.

Kirihara grinned and spun around so that he was going backwards, holding his arms out at his sides for balance. “Look, no eyes!” he said cheerfully, and then promptly slammed into about four people and caused an awkward pile-up of flailing limbs in the middle of the ice.

“Oh dear,” Yukimura murmured. Sanada decided to follow Jackal’s lead and moved slowly and carefully towards the exit ramp.

He made it about half a foot before his feet slid out from under him and he ended up on his back. Niou laughed and gave him a victory sign and he zoomed by.

“Alright?” Yanagi asked, leaning over him.

“Just fine,” Sanada said, frowning and crossing his arms and not even bothering to try and stand up again.

“Anybody seen Jackal?” Marui asked, skidding to a hard stop in front of them and showering Sanada with ice shavings. “I’m hungry and he owes me money.”

“He’s out there already,” Yanagi said, jerking a thumb towards the glass.

“Oh, awesome. Thanks!” Marui popped a bubble and sped off again.

Sanada glowered. “I’m never going ice skating again,” he said.

In the middle of the rink, Yagyuu continued doing his figure-eights.


END

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~~Rikkai. Prompt: burning hot sun and hard training sessions~~


Kirihara collapsed onto the bleachers, panting. “Buchou hates us!” he cried, rolling over onto his back and accepting the water bottle Yanagi handed to him. “I’m dying!”

“No he doesn’t, and no you’re not,” Yanagi said. He dragged a towel across his forehead.

Kirihara pouted. “It’s a million degrees outside,” he said, giving up on drinking and instead dumping the rest of the water onto his face. “Why do we have to run so many laps?”

“Conditioning?” Jackal suggested, lumbering into view. Marui trailed behind him, half bent over and grabbing onto his jersey.

“I think I’m gonna be sick,” he groaned. “Jackal, you have to carry me on the next lap.”

Jackal snorted, arching an eyebrow. “Oh yeah, sure. I’d love to. Not.”

“Y’all are sissies,” Niou said, leaning against the fence. “What was that, three laps?”

Yagyuu glanced at him. “It was five, actually, and does that mean you’re ready for the next set? We’ve still got three more to finish.”

“Er – ehehehe, um, no, not quite ready yet,” Niou said quickly, looking sheepish.

“You know, if we hadn’t just had a three-hour practice I’d be fine,” Kirihara griped. “Or if it were slightly less hot than two billion degrees.”

“It’s in the upper eighties at most, Akaya,” Yanagi said, shading his eyes and glancing toward the sky.

“It’s HOT, okay, senpai?”

“I agree,” Niou said, pushing away from the fence and stumbling onto the bench. “Shove over, would you? I need to sit down.”

Water,” Marui said, looking around for a free bottle. “Quick, before I faint!”

Jackal pushed him down onto a seat. “You’re not going to faint,” he said dryly, shoving a water bottle under his nose. “Drink.”

“We seem to have lost our esteemed captain,” Yagyuu said, glancing around the courts.

“Sanada’s missing, too,” Yanagi pointed out.

“They ditched practice!” Kirihara exclaimed, eyes going wide. “That’s so not cool!”

“I sincerely doubt they ditched,” Yanagi said. “They’re around somewhere.”

Kirihara ignored him. “Maybe we can sneak off since they’re not here,” he said eagerly. “That way I won’t die from heat stroke.”

“I suggest that you don’t.”

Kirihara winced. “Oh crap,” he muttered, swiveling around to see Sanada standing a few feet away, his arms crossed. “Umm, I was just kidding, Sanada-fukubuchou! Ehehe.”

“Where’s Yukimura?” Jackal asked.

A blast of cold water to the back of his head was his answer.

“Here,” Yukimura said calmly, as Jackal yelped and spun around. The rest of the team followed suit, Marui wringing out the side of his shirt that had gotten caught in the attack, and Yanagi shaking water out of his hair. Yukimura smiled, tapping the end of one of the school’s hoses against the palm of his hand.

“Buchou!” Kirihara exclaimed, standing and backing away warily.

“Where’d you get that?” Niou asked.

“I wasn’t aware the school had hoses of that length…” Yagyuu said.

“I was watching you run,” Yukimura said, still smiling pleasantly as he continued tapping the hose. “It was pathetic. Stumbling around like you were first years and you hadn’t been to a Rikkaidai practice before. And just because of a little heat.”

The team collectively took a step closer together.

“…It is approximately eighty-seven degrees,” Yanagi spoke up. “With clear skies and little to no wind, plus the slight humidity which makes it feel about ninety-four degrees.”

“Yes,” Sanada said, whipping a Super Soaker Max Infusion XXP 500 out from behind his back. “Which is why we decided to cool you down a bit.”

The team collectively blinked.

“Oh shit,” Marui said.

“RUN!” Kirihara yelled. And then he promptly found himself with a face full of water as Yukimura turned the hose back on before he had even taken two steps.

“Last person who manages to stay mostly dry only has to run two more sets of laps instead of three,” Yukimura said, turning the hose onto Yagyuu. “Akaya’s already out.”

“Aww man!” Kirihara stomped his foot against the ground.

“You telling me you didn’t see that coming?” Niou asked, pulling Kirihara in front of him and ducking down as Sanada took aim.

“It’s not that!” Kirihara said, scrambling away and hiding behind Jackal.

“Then what is it?” said Marui, who was also using Jackal as a shield.

“Now I’m cold!


END

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So I had more to say, but I'm just gonna stick it in another post. Yay! There are maaaaany more drabbles coming, though. They'll be posted...as soon as I've made sure people have gotten their cards, heh. And I have no idea when the next chapter of 'All the Answers' will be up, so um...stop asking. ^^;;

...♥?

~Maxine
ext_28395: (happy happy joy joy [bleach])

[identity profile] illuminations.livejournal.com 2007-01-04 10:37 pm (UTC)(link)
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MAXIE! WIN!

YOU HAVE TO WRITE MORE SANADA. I LOVE LOVE LOVE YOUR SANADA.

♥♥♥!!!

[identity profile] maxine-chan.livejournal.com 2007-01-06 10:23 am (UTC)(link)
aljkshdflkjahsdfasd. Heeeee.

Sanada is surprisingly fun to write!! ...When I turn him into a huge dork. XDDD

Thaaaank yooouuu!!! :x:x

[identity profile] plotbunnytohma.livejournal.com 2007-01-05 01:06 am (UTC)(link)
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akahfkjas!! AWESOMENESS. AKAYAAAAAA! AND SANADA! AND JACKAL! JACKAL!!! How could you not have confidence in writing RikkaiDai?!

[identity profile] maxine-chan.livejournal.com 2007-01-06 10:24 am (UTC)(link)
I've never really written them before!! akjsdhfklajsd. But yay, I'm so glad you liked it!! :D :D :D Thanks, hon!!! :x

[identity profile] bouncy.livejournal.com 2007-01-05 01:16 am (UTC)(link)
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*_____* OH OH OH HAHAHAHA

THEY WERE HILARIOUS!!!! AND I SECOND WHAT DI SAID, DEFINITLY MORE! SANADA = DOOOORK!

[identity profile] maxine-chan.livejournal.com 2007-01-06 10:26 am (UTC)(link)
OH YOU. ahdkfjahslkdf. I admit, dork!Sanada is way too much fun to write. Haha. ^^;;

Wheee, I'm glad you enjoyed them! THANK YOU!!! :x

[identity profile] danbi.livejournal.com 2007-01-05 02:09 am (UTC)(link)
kdnfldsfksdnfdlksd oh my God WOW. I think I am a little bit in love with you. These were AMAZING! AIEEEEEE! They really truly were. I'm so glad you decided to write them, ahhh, so great!

“Buchou, watch!” Kirihara suddenly yelled, nothing but a blur as he flew past them. “Watch this! Watch me! Are you watching?”

“I’m watching, Akaya!” Yukimura called back.


Oh my God, Akaya is SO CUTE! Hahahah!

“Alright?” Yanagi asked, leaning over him.

“Just fine,” Sanada said, frowning and crossing his arms and not even bothering to try and stand up again.


Sanada! Oh my! He is so grumpy and bad at ice skating I just LOVE IT. I really, really do. I can so see him just staring up with his ass hurting from falling down ahahahahahahaah.

Plus the second one was cute too:

“Yes,” Sanada said, whipping a Super Soaker Max Infusion XXP 500 out from behind his back. “Which is why we decided to cool you down a bit.”

AHAHAHAHAHAHAH! Sanada rocks. That's all there is to it.

THAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAANK YOU! I am amazed and awesome'd out and I think your Rikkai rocked. ♥!!

[identity profile] maxine-chan.livejournal.com 2007-01-06 10:28 am (UTC)(link)
*__*

I love your comments. :D

Kiriharaaaa. He is such love, I've always been a huge fan of him, hehe. Sanada, on the other hand, I'm growing more and more fond of writing. ^____________^

You're quite welcome, hon!! And thank YOU!!! :x

[identity profile] xiahtic.livejournal.com 2007-01-05 04:35 am (UTC)(link)
MAXIEEEEE OMFG I KNOW I ALREADY SQUEED TO YOU IN CHAT BUT OMFGGGGGG

“I have no idea, but if Kirihara knocks down one more person, I’m leaving before anyone gets a chance to kick us out,” Jackal said. He watched as Marui pulled ahead briefly, but Kirihara sped up as they rounded the curve, blowing past three people and knocking one of them onto their ass.

Sanada looked at him expectantly.

“That guy doesn’t count,” Jackal said. “I’ve seen him fall about a billion times without Kirihara’s help.”


khdsfklhdkhdsfjhglkdfsjhglkjdshfjg!!!! AHAHAHAHAHA I DIED SO HARD YESSSS OH JACKAL. *_*

“Oh dear,” Yukimura murmured. Sanada decided to follow Jackal’s lead and moved slowly and carefully towards the exit ramp.

He made it about half a foot before his feet slid out from under him and he ended up on his back. Niou laughed and gave him a victory sign and he zoomed by.

“Alright?” Yanagi asked, leaning over him.

“Just fine,” Sanada said, frowning and crossing his arms and not even bothering to try and stand up again.


kdhfkldhgkjdfg DED. GOD I LAUGHED SO. HARD. lkjhfkdhfgjk YOUR SANADA. OH MAXIE.

“…It is approximately eighty-seven degrees,” Yanagi spoke up. “With clear skies and little to no wind, plus the slight humidity which makes it feel about ninety-four degrees.”

“Yes,” Sanada said, whipping a Super Soaker Max Infusion XXP 500 out from behind his back. “Which is why we decided to cool you down a bit.”


YANAGIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII khdsgkjfhgkjdhfg AND SANADA OMFG kjdfhgkjdhgkjhdfkgjhdfkhglkdfglshdfg!!!!!! I COULD PICTURE THIS AND GOD I LOLED ALL OVER THE PLACE. *_*

“Aww man!” Kirihara stomped his foot against the ground.

“You telling me you didn’t see that coming?” Niou asked, pulling Kirihara in front of him and ducking down as Sanada took aim.

“It’s not that!” Kirihara said, scrambling away and hiding behind Jackal.

“Then what is it?” said Marui, who was also using Jackal as a shield.

“Now I’m cold!”


AKAYA OMFG OMFG klhdlfkhdkskgjhdkjfg HE ROCKED!! THAT HAD TO BE MY FAVE SO MUCH djgfdhfkjdflg *__________________* MAXIE ILU SO HARD RIGHT NOW kldhflkdjhglkjdhfg YOUR RIKKAI=WIN!!!!

:x:x:x

[identity profile] maxine-chan.livejournal.com 2007-01-06 10:30 am (UTC)(link)
askdjhfk;ajs;dlkfja;sdfas YOU ARE TOO MUCH!!! ^__________^ Heeee, I'm so glad you liked this! Seriously, I really appreciate it! Ahaha, I might just have to write MORE Rikkai if it's going to get me fantabulous comments from awesome people. ^.~ THANK YOU!!

[identity profile] obsessed-love.livejournal.com 2007-01-05 02:17 pm (UTC)(link)
YAY RIKKAI! Omg those were awesome! XD The first one made me laugh so much and the second one was just love. XD Poor Akaya~ <3

[identity profile] maxine-chan.livejournal.com 2007-01-06 10:31 am (UTC)(link)
HAHAHA, that icon is awesome. Maaaan, they should have kept the red uniforms. :3

Thank you so much!! I'm glad you enjoyed them! ^.^

[identity profile] obsessed-love.livejournal.com 2007-01-06 02:44 pm (UTC)(link)
Yes, red was so much better than... mustard? XD;

No problem~

[identity profile] axtar.livejournal.com 2007-01-05 02:40 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh, these were awesome to read. I love the way you write the Rikkai team; kudos to you!

[identity profile] maxine-chan.livejournal.com 2007-01-06 10:32 am (UTC)(link)
Wheee, THANK YOU!! Ahaha, I'd never really written them before, so seriously, I'm glad you enjoyed it!

[identity profile] rice-chan.livejournal.com 2007-01-05 03:04 pm (UTC)(link)
lol... Poor Sanada... Guess ice skating isn't his forte now is it? lol.. I enjoyed the first and the second one very nicely ^^ Yukimura and Sanada armed with water... I miss the hot weather already.. it's too cold ^^;; and when it's too hot, I'm going to miss winter.. XD Anyways, awesome drabbles~~`* ^^

[identity profile] maxine-chan.livejournal.com 2007-01-06 10:34 am (UTC)(link)
rofl, apparently not. ^^;; Heee, and thank you!! Very glad you liked these! :D
sparklespiff: (yachiru by silchi)

[personal profile] sparklespiff 2007-01-05 04:51 pm (UTC)(link)
OMG. WOW. *________*

Truth? I always had trouble understanding why everyone thought Kirihara was so cute, but OMG. Because of this line?

“Buchou, watch!” Kirihara suddenly yelled, nothing but a blur as he flew past them. “Watch this! Watch me! Are you watching?”

I think I get it now.

Also the idea of Sanada with a Super Soaker makes me grin and grin and grin.

[identity profile] maxine-chan.livejournal.com 2007-01-06 10:37 am (UTC)(link)
Ahahaha, I love Kirihara. Poor boy, he's the youngest one on his team, HE JUST WANTS SOME ATTENTION. *ruffles his hair*

I've been having too much fun with Sanada lately, eheh. :D THANK YOU, MONIKINS!!! :x

[identity profile] slinkiestumble.livejournal.com 2007-01-05 05:24 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh. These are undeniably awesome. Kirihara! Makes a girl grin, that one. And Jackal, too! So great, both of these. Thanks for sharing. :)

[identity profile] maxine-chan.livejournal.com 2007-01-06 10:37 am (UTC)(link)
Heee, thank YOU for reading! I had fun with these, so I'm glad you liked them!!! :D

[identity profile] willowscry.livejournal.com 2007-01-05 06:36 pm (UTC)(link)
...and Yanagi shaking water out of his hair.

That so reinforces my belief that he's a puppy at heart. *gets stabbed for that*

And I'm glad to see that you didn't leave ANY one out. I tend to see some Rikkai fics where they just forget one or two people for some odd reason. So I love you much for NOT forgetting anyone. I was laughing just as much as everyone else, these were hilarious.

[identity profile] maxine-chan.livejournal.com 2007-01-06 10:39 am (UTC)(link)
rofl, such a puppy, that boy. ;)

Ahaha, yeah, I like to include all the members on the team. Which makes for an interesting time when I'm writing Yamabuki or something, because I'm always like, now who the hell is that other doubles team again?? ^^;; But yay, I'm so glad you liked these! :D Thank you!!

[identity profile] willowscry.livejournal.com 2007-01-06 08:15 pm (UTC)(link)
*laughs* Actually, that was like my reaction the icon I used. I thought he was sniffing Inui. >.< Yeah...and the first thought in my head was "He's a puppy!" I'm just rather silly ^.^

*laughs* Yamabuki is a very forgettable team.

[identity profile] celen.livejournal.com 2007-01-05 08:07 pm (UTC)(link)
I thought I'd express my love. ♥ Just so awesome, both of them! Especially the last one. God, I always forget how much I actually love Rikkai. And you wrote about them so well! They were so very IC and funny and lovable. Aww.

Thank you so much for writing them, I'll look forward to see more of your fics! *glomps*

[identity profile] maxine-chan.livejournal.com 2007-01-06 10:40 am (UTC)(link)
Oh, thank you so much!! I'm a huge stickler for IC-ness, but I've never really written Rikkai before so I wasn't sure how they came out! So yay, I'm reeeaally glad you like them!!! <3333333 More fic is coming sooooon...ish. :P

[identity profile] x-hikari.livejournal.com 2007-01-05 08:58 pm (UTC)(link)
k uhm yea you are the best!
lol they were so funny and awesome and you should write more rikkai please
I love Rikkaidai and you just made me love them even more
You are incredible
Loves


<3<3<3

[identity profile] maxine-chan.livejournal.com 2007-01-06 10:41 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you!! I'm so glad you liked them! Hehe, I'll try to write more Rikkai, promise. ;)

[identity profile] mizukomidori.livejournal.com 2007-01-05 10:01 pm (UTC)(link)
Those were awesome. Kirihara is so cute sometimes. He reminds me of a five year trying to get his parents attention. And Ahaha, Sanada can't ice skate. Win.

[identity profile] maxine-chan.livejournal.com 2007-01-06 10:42 am (UTC)(link)
Heee, yes, I love Kirihara. He's so cute. :D :D :D Thank you!!!

[identity profile] turtly-one.livejournal.com 2007-01-06 06:10 am (UTC)(link)
*randomly stumbles across ljournal*

...I think I've just fallen in love with Rikkai even more.

These were just so...cute! *squees* Thank you for posting them! :DDDD.

[identity profile] maxine-chan.livejournal.com 2007-01-06 10:43 am (UTC)(link)
Yay, I'm glad you liked them!!! I've never really written Rikkai before, so seriously, I'm happy that I apparently did alright. ^^;; THANK YOU!!!

[identity profile] bloodybrilliant.livejournal.com 2007-01-06 06:19 am (UTC)(link)
EEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!! What are you worried about writing Rikkai?!?!?!? You write them SUBERBLY!!! alskdfjalsfjaslk THIS IS JUST LSKJDFLKSDJ SANADA! JUST. KIRIHARA! YANAGI!!! OMG AND OMG EVERYONE! LOL YUKIMURA WITH A HOSE ROFL!!!! YOU WIN!!! <.< \RIT MOR PLZ!!! D:

:x ♥

[identity profile] maxine-chan.livejournal.com 2007-01-06 10:44 am (UTC)(link)
akjsdhlfkjahsldkjf BECAUSE I'D NEVER REALLY WRITTEN THEM BEFORE!!!! ^_____________^ BUT YAY, THANK YOU SO MUCH ISOLOVE. <333333333

And also. BE READY. I'm coming to you for prompts next. :P :x:x

[identity profile] bloodybrilliant.livejournal.com 2007-01-07 04:57 am (UTC)(link)
:D :D :D But YAY!!!! YOU CAN DO IT!!! ^____^ :D SEE?!??! :x :x :x MAXIESMOOCHES. <33333333333333

Omg. *_* I'll start thinking of them NOW. <.< :x :x :x ♥ ♥