http://doctorjonesy.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] doctorjonesy.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] maxine_chan 2006-07-01 06:12 am (UTC)

Yay! I was so surprised (and happy) when I refreshed my friends page and saw this update. This chapter is great!

I did notice a couple of typos though:

“You pushed me out of your heard and then fell on top of me,”

His father was scolding him for not being the top in his class, for loosing to a Muggle of all horrid things...


The end of the chapter has really intrigued me, and I look forward to continuing to follow this story. ♥




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